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There was a Blind Girl who used to hate everyone except her boy friend. She always used to say that i will marry you if i could see. One day sum one donated eyes to her . The she went to her boy friend home & when she saw him sge shocked to see that , He was also blind .........





















Her boy friend asked " Will You Marry Me Now". But she refused "saying no i cant. But he went away silent, by saying "JUST TAKE CARE OF MY EYES"........

2006-07-20 10:25:39 · 9 answers · asked by ||| Romeo Boy ||| 4 in Family & Relationships Friends

9 answers

well if 1 is good and and 10 is bad I'd give that a 1. but if it were the other way around that's a 10. either way i liked it. it was very romantic and sweet. I'm curious,did u right that yourself?

2006-07-20 11:54:00 · answer #1 · answered by friendlyghurl 2 · 1 0

10

2006-07-20 11:24:35 · answer #2 · answered by doglady 5 · 0 0

That is a veeery short short story, but it is SUPER sweet!! Add more detail & work out the grammar/punctuation & it would be great!

2006-07-20 10:29:05 · answer #3 · answered by Becky 3 · 0 0

the story itself is probable a 7.5, in spite of the incontrovertible fact that it needs to be re-labored and re-worded... how ought to he pass away silent jointly as asserting something? good tough draft although... attempt writing it as a poem, must be very efficient as a poem.

2016-11-02 10:26:47 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

10! that was sooo SWEET. now the real question is would u do that for someone?? j/k

2006-07-20 10:58:22 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

omg thats so sad i'd nevre want that to happen to me!! i give it a 100% 100

2006-07-21 03:06:42 · answer #6 · answered by Emily 3 · 0 0

It's really sad oh my i'm so glad it's just a story.

2006-07-20 10:29:56 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

ok - put this in the philosphy section

2006-07-20 10:55:37 · answer #8 · answered by river_runs 6 · 0 0

that is sweet

2006-07-20 10:29:44 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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