There was a Blind Girl who used to hate everyone except her boy friend. She always used to say that i will marry you if i could see. One day sum one donated eyes to her . The she went to her boy friend home & when she saw him sge shocked to see that , He was also blind .........
Her boy friend asked " Will You Marry Me Now". But she refused "saying no i cant. But he went away silent, by saying "JUST TAKE CARE OF MY EYES"........
2006-07-20 10:23:20 · 21 answers · asked by ||| Romeo Boy ||| 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
oh that was such a good one. 10/10
2006-07-20 10:39:11 · answer #1 · answered by Yonna1 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-07-20 10:32:56 · answer #2 · answered by WrizzLe 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-07-20 10:27:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The story itself is probably a 7.5, but it needs to be re-worked and re-worded... how could he go away silent while saying something? good rough draft though... try writing it as a poem, could be very powerful as a poem.
2006-07-20 10:31:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a unanimous 10
2006-07-20 10:29:42 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
All i will assert is WOW. that's an extremely thrilling piece of artwork. i'm guessing the boy is at a cemetery, and he probable lost somebody on the threshold of him. The language fairly captures the emotional fact of the 2nd.
2016-11-02 10:26:44 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uh that's kinda creepy! Depending on what you were going for I'd give it a 6.
2006-07-20 10:30:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was pretty good. I give it a nine. Kinda wish you could fix the spelling errors.
2006-07-20 10:31:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i give that a 9
2006-07-20 11:11:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is pretty sad and I love it you should be an author.I rate it a 10.
2006-07-20 10:40:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋