A man once told a story of the future & space
An incredible story of an incredible place
Called Vesper, a world where people fight
For freedom from a superior might
A warrior called Aden once fell in love
With a girl named Jacky from the stars above.
Their lives were adventure, romance & pain
They gave birth to a star-child, a new form of man
Kelly once fell through time & space
& was found by Karza, a man with a metal face
He took her & raped her & with the use of his powers
She gave birth to twins, born in hours
Away from Karza, away she ran
With children in arm to the forgotten land
Once safely away there she met
Ikera, by name with the body of ant
He gave her powers quite unknown, &
Which enabled her to stand up & throw the stone
That conquered Karza, setting free
The land for all eternity
Once the armor was down, so was told
That the man inside had been controlled
By the embodiment of evil, hatred & fear
They parted as lovers after the tears
2006-07-20 07:11:00 · 4 answers · asked by blakefabian2003 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
So ends the story of all but one
Susan, by name, who took a gun
& in the defense of Vesper did fall
Joining her comrades once-and-for-all
2006-07-20 07:11:21 · update #1
it's great.... congratulations to your father!
2006-07-20 07:14:25 · answer #1 · answered by *<:-)☼♥♣♫♪ 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
2006-07-20 14:16:45 · answer #2 · answered by Sunshine 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a nice poem..he should write a book
2006-07-20 14:14:34 · answer #3 · answered by mrshunter_2002 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I went spinning for a while... but ya!..nice
2006-07-20 14:17:05 · answer #4 · answered by Evy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋