Open eyes
2/28/06
By: Smo
1:48 am
You never really cared for me
Something I denied to see
At first you were sweet
And made me feel complete
You would hold me tight
It felt so right
You'd softly kiss my arm
Cursing me with your charm
When I gave myself to you
I did not have a clue
The affection in your eyes
Were just a desires lie
Then you starting hanging with her
And it was like we never were
You found no time for me
And ignored my desperate plea
Now she isn't single anymore
And you think things will be as before
But no longer are my eyes closed
They're wide open, leaving you exposed
You are nothing but a disgusting dick
Disguised in honey so thick
But you won't be able to evade
Death from the one you betrayed
2006-07-19 19:29:42 · 4 answers · asked by kissmybender2003 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It's very good and so romantic....
2006-07-19 20:34:03 · answer #1 · answered by Ratna Dewi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not my sort of poetry, I don't really like it. Thats only my opinion though!
2006-07-20 05:36:13 · answer #2 · answered by jacintamusiclover 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's VERY good except the death part.
2006-07-20 03:40:38 · answer #3 · answered by darleya 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2006-07-23 01:13:08 · answer #4 · answered by nanlwart 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋