Great love can give us hope to dream
That dawn will follow darkest night
That peace will triumph in the end.
And somehow make it all to right.
2006-07-19 11:19:25 · 4 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
how about "And somehow make it all come right"?
2006-07-19 11:25:30 · update #1
And it was written about God's love and the others who show it, like Mother Theresa
2006-07-19 11:26:18 · update #2
maybe speaks of God
2006-07-19 11:23:43 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think it is good up to the last line, where the word 'somehow' seems to me to show not enough of the hope that is so encouraging in the first line. I don't want to put words in your mouth but maybe the last line could use the rhyming word 'light',
for example, "And darkness will give way to light."
2006-07-20 00:37:47 · answer #2 · answered by haroldpohl2000 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
All to right doesn't sound right. But the rest is good.
2006-07-19 18:23:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
And keep our faith through out our life.
2006-07-19 18:31:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋