i did write a poem to my babe... do you think its nice?
This is my poem. For me its important that you read it and understand it cuz i found it in a place so beautiful and that a person like you just can search inside that.... and it is in my heart.
my babe i love you with all my own
After so many nights and long days
sighing and allowing the wind to go
I was not waited by this for that so much I long
that nowadays makes me be reborn
I was not thinking about believing what it was spending
meanwhile I could manage correctly
of bad vibrates to good feelings
you changed to me without realizing!
you are indescribable but believable
I even cannot believe that really it exists
for me you are my quite
my hero of every day
I admire you, respect you, love you
infinite sleep I have in my mind
wanting to burn them along with you
my love, for which so much I long next to mine
2006-07-19 04:25:42 · 18 answers · asked by *live,laugh,love* 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
i am a former 2 time poet of the year nominee by the young poets society and i think it was very good
2006-07-19 04:29:38 · answer #1 · answered by elvis2 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Perfect; Parfait
2006-07-19 11:27:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds sweet....if only my babe were to do this.....even "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue" poems are enough for me
I wrote her a song :o)
2006-07-19 11:34:19 · answer #3 · answered by bb_biker2002 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To truly write from the heart is a remarkable thing and he should be touched by your honesty.Good work.
2006-07-19 11:29:41 · answer #4 · answered by sexy lady 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How sweet! I wish Someone would write one like that for me. He is lucky to have you.
2006-07-19 11:28:20 · answer #5 · answered by Texas Cowboy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It warms the heart
2006-07-19 11:27:13 · answer #6 · answered by why 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its alright. Kind of hard to follow but its sweet.
2006-07-19 11:28:38 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice! Your partner should be very honored.
You must love this person very deeply!
2006-07-19 11:29:07 · answer #8 · answered by crazyotto65 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is so sweet!!!you should give it to them deffintally!!!i would love it if my boyfriend gave that to me it would make me know that you really care!!!
2006-07-19 11:31:46 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a very nice poem. I love it could you please tell me where you found it.
2006-07-19 11:29:48 · answer #10 · answered by ~*Vanessa. S.*~ 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋