How could I be so stupid,
How could I not have noticed.
I've had friends all around me,
Yet I have not seen them.
Friends all around me,
Reaching out.
Yet I did not see them,
I didn't notice.
You have always been there,
But I didn't see you.
For I was too blind,
With my life.
Maybe I should take,
Some time.
To be with friends,
Friends like you.
2006-07-19 03:20:21 · 6 answers · asked by Sammy Hagar 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
nice, thoughtful, and meaningful.......go for it.....
2006-07-19 10:58:41 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice but you're "suckering" people into reading your poetry. Why not just ask for opinions about your writing? There are alot of people who love poetry especially new writers. Good Luck.
2006-07-19 10:32:47 · answer #2 · answered by Sassy OLD Broad 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Happens to me, too - they are there and yet I don't see them!
Yes,
Maybe you should take,
Some time.
To be with friends,
Friends like them.
2006-07-19 13:06:21 · answer #3 · answered by Hibernating Ladybird 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice encore!
2006-07-19 10:24:33 · answer #4 · answered by angelpockets 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo, honey, bravo!!!!!!!
2006-07-19 10:36:40 · answer #5 · answered by cOMpLiCaTeD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
2006-07-19 10:31:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋