I think this poem will bring the nation to its knees!
hello i am cool
and you are not
so ha ha you are not
and i am
cool
2006-07-18 13:09:32 · 18 answers · asked by lost 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Very nice! Simple yet sublime, I think you've capture it in a minimal sense. I can hear a real ripper of a punk tune behind it, and it makes it's own chorus. Inspired!
2006-07-18 13:43:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 1⤋
Just because you spend so much time on your knees doesnt mean the nation needs to join you.
Dont quit your day job.
2006-07-18 13:13:57 · answer #2 · answered by tifferbell 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Edgar Allen Poe!
Wrote some verses longer, deeper
Quite a time ago
2006-07-18 13:22:00 · answer #3 · answered by harmonslide 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh, my. I never knew saying the same things over and over again and writing preschooler poetry has actually gotten cool!
2006-07-19 01:33:35 · answer #4 · answered by Charlotte 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hello i am hot
and you are not
so ha ha you are cool
and i am
hot
2006-07-18 13:13:49 · answer #5 · answered by Larry 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow. Brilliant! It will cure the world of all problems!
2006-07-18 13:13:28 · answer #6 · answered by tigepopo_fluffyboo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not really your saying the same stuff over and over. Very Boring.
2006-07-18 13:12:49 · answer #7 · answered by Megan G 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is that considerable a poem? Bwahahahaha...! poor girl
2006-07-18 13:15:14 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not going to be my personal favorite, but it didn't bother me nearly as much as it bothered Freddy J Fun...
2006-07-18 13:53:18 · answer #9 · answered by autumnfaerie8 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry but you are definitely not cool, in fact your poem sucks. Don't quit your day job kiddo.
2006-07-18 13:13:09 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋