I'm making a website and to maintain the design I need a shorter form of the sentence: "How did you hear about us?"
2006-07-18 05:17:25 · 11 answers · asked by aditya_tx 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Found us - how?
2006-07-18 05:21:04 · answer #1 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-11-02 06:59:06 · answer #2 · answered by aguas 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Found us how?
Little shorter...
2006-07-18 05:22:00 · answer #3 · answered by jooker 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmmm...
How did you know?
How did you hear?
hear about us?
Sorry, hope it's helpful.
2006-07-18 05:21:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Howya hear 'bout us?
2006-07-18 05:21:43 · answer #5 · answered by ideogenetic 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Who told you about us?
2006-07-18 05:21:34 · answer #6 · answered by Sandra M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok, who snitched?
2006-07-18 06:17:48 · answer #7 · answered by Sick Puppy 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How did you discover us?
2006-07-18 05:32:48 · answer #8 · answered by ♥Ms. Heart♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how'd u hear bout us?
2006-07-18 05:21:10 · answer #9 · answered by Deana G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HOT how did you
2006-07-18 08:11:03 · answer #10 · answered by HEY boo boo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋