Let's get "Politically correct"
There was an old lady who lived in a shoe.
I don't know why she lived in a shoe.
She lived in a shoe and went to the zoo.
She took a train, and flew a plane.
....and then they came....
They searched her bags, then...
...dropped her drawers...
to the floor.
And now the old lady,
she don't go to the zoo...
...anymore.
2006-07-18 02:11:45 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
lol great ryme keep up the work lol
2006-07-18 02:14:49 · answer #1 · answered by *~BabiGurl~* 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It was OK.
I don't think it was as clever as it pretends to be. It'll do as a first draft, but needs work done on it - the first three lines fall flat, the scansion falls in several places and there is a general feeling that the poem doesn't seem to know what it wants to be.
2006-07-18 09:33:34 · answer #2 · answered by durulz2000 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excuse me sir!
a technical question....
Does she ever went to the cinema at a certain time before?
2006-07-18 09:46:25 · answer #3 · answered by iseeyouattheshow86 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm.. yeah, is this supposed to be a childs rhyme?
LoL! It's very comical great for a good laugh!!
2006-07-18 09:15:09 · answer #4 · answered by Myrt 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Leonard, it was good up to the last stanza
2006-07-18 09:15:38 · answer #5 · answered by barbie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NO sense Dude!!
2006-07-18 09:47:18 · answer #6 · answered by arpan j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it!
2006-07-18 09:42:32 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummm...it...uhhh...was wonderful...yeah, thats it....it was wonderful...
2006-07-18 09:15:27 · answer #8 · answered by nick m 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
can't understand :-|
2006-07-18 09:20:10 · answer #9 · answered by dips 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋