Hi, selly. I'm John. It's my first time writing a English letter to you. do you remember the time when we first met in 1st grade. you'd always sat in the back of me 'cause you were called by name later than me in class. we were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. when you reached the top of our school I really envied you. I'm studing hard now, however my test score isn't that good. Wrighting you, I remember dimly the time when I were in 1st grade. As we were in the same class, we used to go to see a movie and a concert together. On account that you took a Chinese class and I took a Japanes class, after all we took a class separately, though. It's lucky to see each other frequently as we live closely. Only for this reason, you shouldn't forget me. I hope we could take a class together when we become 3rd grade. Then, there will be a room for you and I would be the same classmates. Though we won't go to the same school, you should remember me. Keep in touch often using a mail.
2006-07-17 23:55:41 · 10 answers · asked by omazzri 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Dear Selly,
My name is John. This is my first time writing an English letter to you. Do you remember when we met in first grade? You always sat behind me because you were called after me in class. We were both kind of shy at first, but now we've become friends.
When you reached the top of our school, I really envied you. I'm studying hard now; however, my test scores aren't that good.
In writing you, I remember dimly the time when I was in first grade. Since we were in the same class, we went to see movies and concerts together.
Even though we take separate classes (I took a class in Chinese, while you took a class in Japanese), I feel lucky
that we get to see each other frequently. For this reason, you shouldn't forget me, or our friendship. I hope we can take a class together when we enter the third grade. If we enter in the same grade, maybe we'll end up as classmates!
Keep in touch often using E-mail.
Your Friend,
If you need help in the future try: http://www.dictionary.com and always read to improve your English skills! One of the best ways to further your knowledge of the English language, is to pick a random word from the Dictionary each day, and to use it verbally and within a sentence.
Good luck!
2006-07-18 00:12:23 · answer #1 · answered by mroof! 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
THE CORRECT WAY :)
Hi Selly, my name is I'm John, it's my first time writing an English letter to you. Do you remember the first time when we met in first grade? You would always sit behind me because your name was called later than mine in class. We were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. When you received good grades I really envied you. I'm studying hard now; however, my test scores are not that good. In writing you, I vaguely remember the time when I was in first grade. When we were in the same class, we used to go to see a movie and a concert together. I remember that you took a Chinese class and I took a Japanese class, and even though we took them separately, we were lucky we lived so close to each other and could see each other frequently. For this reason alone you shouldn't forget me. I hope we can take a class together when we are in third grade, then, we would be in the same room and we would be classmates. Though we won't go to the same school, I hope you will remember me;. Keep in touch often via mail.
2006-07-18 07:12:21 · answer #2 · answered by GVD 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Selly,
I'm John. It's my first time writing a English letter to you. Do you remember the time when we first met in 1st grade? You'd always sat behind me because you were called after me in class. We were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. When you reached the top of our class, I really envied you. I'm studying hard now, however my test score isn't that good. Writing to you, I remember dimly the time when we were in 1st grade. Since we were in the same class, we used to go to see a movie and a concert together. Than you took a Chinese class and I took a Japanese class, so we took classes separately . We get to see each other frequently because we live closely. Because of this , you shouldn't forget me. I hope we can take a class together when we start 3rd grade. Then, you and I would be classmates. Though eventually we won't go to the same school, you should remember me. Keep in touch often by mail.
Ok if was AFTER I went through this that I realized somebody's just having fun with us. damn!
BTW Esther's is the best and most correct way!
2006-07-18 07:12:16 · answer #3 · answered by prinsisss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I will try my best.
Hi, Selly. I'm John. It's my first written English letter to you. Do you remember the time when we first met in 1st grade? You'd always sit behind me cause you were called by name latter than me in class. We were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. When you reached the top of our school, I really envied you. I'm studying hard now, however my test score isn't that good. While writing you, I remember dimly the time when I was in 1st grade. As we were in the same class, we used to go to see movies and concerts together. "Because you took Chinese classes and I took a Japaness classes, our classes became separate." Though, it's lucky to see each other frequently as we live closely. Only for this reason, you shouldn't forget me. I hope we could take classes together when we reach the 3rd grade. Then, there will be room for you and me to be classmates. Though we won't go to the same school, you should remember me. Keep in touch often using a mail.
I hope this serves the purpose. But the sentence in quotes, i didn't understand the meaning. If it is not what you intend to say, please change it.
Thanks for 2 points.
2006-07-18 07:08:03 · answer #4 · answered by smilingface 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, selly. It’s John. It's my first time writing an English letter to you. Do you remember the time when we first met in 1st grade? You’d always sat at the back of me 'cause you were called by name later than mine in class. We were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. When you reached the top of our school I really envied you. I'm studying hard now, however my test score isn't that good. Writing you, I remember dimly the time when I was in 1st grade. As we were in the same class, we use to go to see a movie and a concert together. On account that you took a Chinese class and I took a Japanese class, after all we took a class separately, though. It's lucky to see each other frequently as we live closely. Only for this reason, you shouldn't forget me. I hope we could take a class together when we come in 3rd grade. Then, there will be a room for you and me; we would be the same classmates. Though we won't go to the same school, you should remember me. Keep in touch by mail.
2006-07-18 07:07:02 · answer #5 · answered by Manjima 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, sally. I'm John. It's my first time writing a English letter to you. do you remember the time when we first met in 1st grade. you'd always sat in the back of me 'cause you were called by name later than me in class. we were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. when you reached the top of our school I really envied you. I'm studding hard now, however my test score isn't that good. Writing you, I remember dimly the time when I were in 1st grade. As we were in the same class, we used to go to see a movie and a concert together. On account that you took a Chinese class and I took a Japan es class, after all we took a class separately, though. It's lucky to see each other frequently as we live closely. Only for this reason, you shouldn't forget me. I hope we could take a class together when we become 3rd grade. Then, there will be a room for you and I would be the same classmates. Though we won't go to the same school, you should remember me. Keep in touch often using a mail.
2006-07-18 07:04:31 · answer #6 · answered by sameer_fanna_for_you 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here is the corrected version, hon.
Hi, Selly. I'm John. It's my first time writing an English letter to you. Do you remember the time when we first met in 1st grade? You’d always sat in the back of me 'cause you were called by name later than me in class. We were kind of shy at first, but now we're friends. When you reached the top of our school I really envied you. I'm studying hard now; however my test score isn't that good. Writing you, I remember dimly the time when I was in 1st grade. As we were in the same class, we used to go to see a movie and a concert together. On account that you took a Chinese class and I took a Japanese class, after all we took a class separately, though. It's lucky to see each other frequently as we live closely. Only for this reason, you shouldn't forget me. I hope we could take a class together when we become 3rd grade. Then, there will be a room for you and I would be the same classmates. Though we won't go to the same school, you should remember me. Keep in touch often using email.
2006-07-18 07:01:17 · answer #7 · answered by leathersammie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, looks good. studing should read as "studying".
Japanes should read as "Japanese".
Only for this reason, you shouldn't forget me.
Maybe you can change it to :
Only for this reason, may our friendship last for a long time.
2006-07-18 07:00:14 · answer #8 · answered by Simple 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
use microsoft word spell check
press F7 and it will show you all spelling mistakes and suggestions
2006-07-18 06:57:50 · answer #9 · answered by spark 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
looks good
2006-07-18 06:57:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋