what do you think i need opinions?

Question

i wasnt really tryna rhyme just tryna get a meaning to my poem but what do you think of it

People think they no everything, yet they no nothing at all.
They try to judge me, catogorize me and say what they say about me.
They may think they no me but they dont.
Say mean lies about me and false comments,
Well from now on i dont care about these people they can say what they want dont like how i act dont like who im wit well forget tryna impress people anymore cuz now i dont give a SHI*.
You say that im 2 faced and im phony
Say what you want cuz u just hatin on me.
Cuz yo comments and lies that you say behind my back is not me or how i really act
You just causing all this confusion because you no im a great person.
And forget you and all the other people who despies and think other wise because i will no longer put up with trying to be friends with you

Answer 1

i'm a poet myself...the words/meaning you used in your poem are great....my tip: when writing a poem do not use: "don't, cuz, wit, no (when you mean know)" etc..it confuses the reader...just a little tip..but other than that, i like it!

Answer 2

To be brutally honest with you. . it totally sucks! You say nothing original. This sounds like just another disgruntled rant from a teen trying to fit in. They only difference between yours and the 500 million before you . . . . is that you're grammer and English is absolutely horrible. Since when did todays youth get so lazy they can't even spell out a word. Why do you have to say cuz, 2 faced, wit, im, and all the other words brought on by our pathetic gheto rap culture. Longfellow or Frost you are not.

Answer 3

Now if you can stick to it.
On a scale of 1 to 15 I give it a 14.75.

Answer 4

Opinions on what

Answer 5

I don't read...