How can i make this shorter/better?
- My name is Brooke *
-I am nearly 15 years of age with 3 years of babysitting experience with children 10 months-10 years old
- I am reliable, punctual, responsible, trustworthy, and a great, loving babysitter
- Have general knowledge through a class in school in first aid, CPR, and babysitting (infants and children) and working towards a certificate
- I have a flexible schedule with reasonable prices (negotiable)
- Will give 100% full attention to your kids
- Will do small house work (cleaning) while children are asleep
- I also offer to dog walk, cook simple meals, & tutor
- Available to baby-sit in the *area (local)
Contact me if you have any questions or to see when I am available at…
Home: *
Cell: *
Email: *
References available upon request
I look forward to hearing from you.
Have a great and safe summer!
2006-07-17 08:11:47 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Business & Finance ➔ Small Business
I think it sounds great. You sound very qualified. The only thing you could do if you need to make it shorter would be to turn it into a bullet point list. For example:
My name is Brooke and I am 15 years of age, looking for more baby sitting experience. I love children and my qualifiations are as follows:
- 3 years of babysitting experience with children 10 months to 10 years old
- reliable, punctual, responsible, trustworthy, and a great, loving babysitter
- general knowledge of first aid, CPR, and babysitting (infants and children) and working towards a certificate
- flexible schedule
- reasonable prices
- Will do small house work (cleaning) while children are asleep
- I also offer to dog walk, cook simple meals, & tutor
- Available to baby-sit in the *area (local)
2006-07-17 08:18:06 · answer #1 · answered by sunshine 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Hi my name is Brooke and I am an experienced babsitter. Contact me for further information.
2006-07-17 15:15:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's perfect, but be careful not to give to much repetition.
2006-07-17 15:16:28 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that's perfect for it.
2006-07-17 15:15:06 · answer #4 · answered by Drew 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
are you in newe jersey?
2006-07-17 15:16:42 · answer #5 · answered by lawyer girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do not know.....................
2006-07-17 15:16:23 · answer #6 · answered by skull 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋