RUNAWAY
chorus
Baby, Runaway, Runaway
He Dont Want You Anyway
Think Of The Heartache, Heartache
You Have To Undertake, Undertake
So Just, Go Away, Go Away
Come Back Another Day
You Dont Have To Be Afraid
Getway From That Renegade
verse 1
Afterall that he put you through
That man dont even deserve you
Now I can tell he dont love you
He's only out to hurt you
Should have never kept my distance
Could have took a different stance
And if i only had one instance
I should have took a second chance
chorus
verse 2
And If Cant Be With You
I Dont Know What Else To
Probably wouldn't Have a Clue
But If Only You Knew
If you gave me second date
Then i really wouldnt heisitate
I would gladly sit and wait
For you to demostate
chorus
2006-07-16 11:10:29 · 15 answers · asked by Craig 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
predictable
2006-07-16 11:14:13 · answer #1 · answered by Dr Mukti 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I rate it pretty good. A lot of it rhymes and some of it makes sense.
Average, I'd say. Par for the course. It's not Cole Porter but maybe the tune makes up for that?
Listen to 'I do like to be beside the seaside'- Seriously, for it's musicality and direct lyric fashioning. Don't give up.
2006-07-16 18:16:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There ok, not exactly screaming 'original', you're saying nothing new or anything that seems personal to you. Not describing anything yourself. You need to think of personal ways to decribe situations, not do what every other rapper/singer does and concentrate purely on rhyme. Rating out of 10? 5 in afraid.
2006-07-17 06:30:51 · answer #3 · answered by Alexander 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty awesome!! 10 on a scale of 1-10(10 being the highest)
2006-07-16 18:19:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow ur good i rate it a 10 on a scale 1-10
2006-07-16 18:13:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
might be a good love rap if you could find some really original (not the usual tone-undertone-tone sequence) music for it. can't rate it without reading the music too...and lyrics, of course, should be way longer
2006-07-16 20:34:28 · answer #6 · answered by devilinthedust 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was so HOT! on a scale of 1-10...12
2006-07-16 18:20:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes its good and even if people dont like it its only because they couldnt do any better
Im sure the words have meaning to you making it even more important.
If you like music have you heard john martyn, solid air-he is class!
2006-07-17 05:10:57 · answer #8 · answered by P 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi, the lyrics sound good to me - now all you need is the music to accompany it.. good luck and send me a copy when you get a record deal :-)
2006-07-16 18:35:43 · answer #9 · answered by maidenrocks 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You own a rhyming dictionary, right?
2006-07-16 18:12:23 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds well cool. good luck with the writting. and god bles.
2006-07-17 05:50:01 · answer #11 · answered by Rose 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋