rate this poem 1-10/ its a life poem?

Question

Attachment leads to death in heart.
Watch the sky as tears of sorrow fal upon us all.
Fear is weakness to the fool.
Fear is Maturity and knowledge to the strong.
Many goak about beauty, building up worry and stress over nothing.
Save yourself the worry, for you will never be more beautiful then you are now.
Turning bitter over crisis only shows your weak and useless to society.
Dont bother acting tough, when you have to act and show it, for you are just a mier insect and will get smashed.
Word after word they smile time after time, you must learn to sense the seas of decption or those seas will be filled with your blood.
a traitor will slice your throat in your sleep, a friend is temporary till he's killed by crisis, one who stands strong by your side is your brother or sister.
And suicide is only for the selfish, complain about nobody caring and you only lead to your own fall, for if you no longer care for your life why should anyone else care?

Answer 1

7

Answer 2

7

Answer 3

Believing in yourself you'll have know doubt
believing in love is your biggest fear.
not having faith is your biggest mistake
Not having trust, your just wasting blood.
Very true but your not believing or have 100% in yourself
Let the people make their mistake worry about yours.
If you do have a true friend why would you worry if anyone would care. When a true friend will always be there.
For better for the worse,For good and the bads
Just think positive and know someone will always have your back.

Answer 4

I like it, it has a lot of meaning, have you read "tuesdays with morrie". If you haven't you should, i think you would relate to it well. Oh and 8, i think poems should all have at least a shape, rhythm, or rhyme.

Answer 5

It was really good until the traitor part....

I'd give it a 6