I'm not suicidal, but my friend was a while back, and was planning on killing herself by sitting on some train tracks, and waiting for a train to come by and hit her. That's what this poem is about. It's unfinished, but I'd like feedback on what I've done so far.
You contradict yourself and are feeling perplexed
You stand on the train tracks and wonder what's next
You think of all the words that were left unsaid
While your whole life runs through your head
Then slowly, two Rivers form without a drop of rain
Two reminders of all the pain
With every tear another hope starts shattering
But it'll be over soon, the tracks are ratteling
2006-07-15
19:04:50
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