poem.................?

Question

Im just an angel with broken wings
and softly my torn heart sings
waiting for the warmth the sun brings
for Im just an angel with broken wings
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here alone I softly cry
waiting here for you to die
darkness is where secrets lie
and in this darkness I will cry
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alone is being where no one hears
where no one care of your unheard tears
where time stops and be as it may
being alone is where ill stay
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In darkness I sleep
Your bloood I keep
silently I weep
for I've been hurt to deep
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Answer 1

That is deep, real deep your poems are way better than mine. Anyways you are really good you should take advantage of that and write a book of poems like I plan on doing some day when I get the money. Keep up the good work girl!

Answer 2

I realy like it.
have you heard if this,
More sad than the sad is the unhappy,
More unhappy than the unhappy is the sick,
More sick than the sick is the abandoned,
More abandoned than the abandoned is the desperate,
More desperate than the desperate is the dead,
More dead than the dead is the forgotten.
It's from a book called Kami Kaze made by Tokyopop.

Answer 3

i like it thats really good! i write deep dark poems like this and its inspiring

Answer 4

its kool. it sounds like a little something i wrote.

Answer 5

wow

Answer 6

keep on writing
your good

Answer 7

I can relate.

Answer 8

you have alot of talent