~This Nightmare Won't Last Long~
Darkness surrounds her
It never leaves
Demons haunt her
In her dreams
Nothing in her nightmare
Is exactly what it seems
Ghosts smother her
They cut off her air
But when she opens her eyes
There is nothing there
Spiders crawling
Down her back
She is tense
She can't relax
Breaking skin when they bite
Blood is dripping down her spine
Bats fly high
In the midnight sky
Turning to vampires
Dead but Alive
Burning sunlight
Dying Moon
This nightmare
Won't end soon
Why not you ask?
Well don't you see?
It's not a nightmare
It's not a dream
It is her reality
She can't escape
She wasn't always full of fear
But the darkness kept her prisoner here
In her mind
For all time
She wants to believe
That there is hope
She will escape
That's what she's told
So to herself she sings a song
She tells herself
This Nightmare Won't Last Long....
2006-07-15 13:13:53 · 18 answers · asked by cat 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
You should put the original author's name before you get in trouble, oter than that the poem is really deep and well thought of
2006-07-15 13:17:10 · answer #1 · answered by Slifer! 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That was REALLY good. I've always wanted to be blessed with the ability to write, but I'm afriad I wasn't. Practice makes perfect though, eh?
2006-07-15 20:16:59 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely.
2006-07-15 20:16:35 · answer #3 · answered by minstrel_of_munificence 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was so deep did u rite if u did wow great job
2006-07-15 20:18:39 · answer #4 · answered by Amanda F 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think it's that creepy, but good rhyming i mean for someone who actually wrote it.Don't think i've never heard of cut&paste
2006-07-15 20:17:43 · answer #5 · answered by ☺■☺■☺ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like some don't sleep at night, how chilling.
2006-07-15 20:17:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. Better than me, You should read some of my sister's though...
2006-07-15 20:17:44 · answer #7 · answered by Switch Blade 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u copyed it from some where else ive heard it be4 good try though
2006-07-15 20:15:34 · answer #8 · answered by mystic_dragon_318 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like this one to.
2006-07-15 20:43:42 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow thats amazing and deep did u write it?
2006-07-15 20:19:21 · answer #10 · answered by green eyed chika 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋