Supernatural pheonomenon make me listen to music
of higher places,take me to another plane of being.
stag me with daggers of passion that arch......my back and make me stutter as they penetr8 my soul.this complusive energy that you inject into me makes me melt ad run in a river of sweetwaters....so get dwn on your knees and drink from ths fountai of life that wi ll forever quench your thrst.!!!!!
2006-07-15 07:44:27 · 11 answers · asked by voodoochaeld 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Have you got a tune for this one.. May be it will sound good when you sing it...
2006-07-15 07:55:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get into writing music, doesn't really qualify as poetry. Sounds a little like rap to me. You may have just found your calling. The added plus is you don't even have to sing good just talk good. Shame they don't have a check spelling button for that. lol :-)
2006-07-15 07:53:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-02 03:03:55 · answer #3 · answered by Erika 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
as a potry it is an absolute piece of ****. Sorry, but that's true. Well, its ok if it's the one you write only for yourself and wont show to all the world, as a professional poetry its what i wrote in the first sentence. As i keep telling to every 'poet' here - cliches cliches cliches and 'feelings' or 'pains' that would fit for your blog but not poetry or any piece or writing.
2006-07-15 08:14:04 · answer #4 · answered by Solveiga 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As was said before, sounds a little more like rap than poetry. But that's ok, just see what'cha can do.
2006-07-15 09:38:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yo if that rymed at all it be a hot rap lyric. Go to postpoems.com
best place for all poets that dont no it and showit.
2006-07-15 08:03:00 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry
2006-07-15 07:49:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, that's not bad. It might be better in audio than in written form. You certainly are expressive.
2006-07-15 09:29:16 · answer #8 · answered by Perfectly Said 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cOoOoL THAT'S some piece of talent girl
nice work
2006-07-15 07:48:55 · answer #9 · answered by BlAcK_zOoNe 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Does this have something to do with you sex life?
2006-07-15 08:08:32 · answer #10 · answered by funkymonkey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋