I was wondering, what you think of this poem! I wrote it!
What am I?
It's seems to me that the world is new
As if I am the only one without a clue
People seem to know what they are
Yet my expectations of me lay afar
What was I thinking from the start
Thinking I was a beautiful work of art
Yet I don't know what others think of me
What am I even supposed to be?
Am I the painting or the frame?
Am I the dice or the entire game?
Am I the shore, or am I the sea?
Am I the thing that lays far from me?
Am I the dove or am I the crow?
Do I have the rythm or do I have the flow?
What am I?
Thats what worry me the most
Am I human or am I a ghost?....
Read more poems I wrote at my website!
http://www.freewebs.com/faryal121
2006-07-15 03:26:15 · 11 answers · asked by !!!VOUGE!!! 1 in Games & Recreation ➔ Hobbies & Crafts
Thumbs up. But I would change- As if I am the only one with a clue.
2006-07-19 05:30:52 · answer #1 · answered by sweet & sour 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thumbs up
2006-07-19 12:26:51 · answer #2 · answered by ronce_1118 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was the best poem i ever heard ,thumbs up 4 sure
2006-07-15 10:40:27 · answer #3 · answered by Tina T 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Meh. Can't give it a thumbs up, but I don't wanna give it a thumbs down. It's OK, nothin' to get excited about. That's just my opinion, though.
2006-07-19 12:27:30 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Writing poetry can become very profitable. Thumbs up!
2006-07-15 10:46:46 · answer #5 · answered by American Pride 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Two thumbs way way up. It is really good. Maybe you can publish your poems for money someday
2006-07-19 12:35:11 · answer #6 · answered by knitting guy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I write poetry myself and I liked it, its very thought provoking.
2006-07-19 12:28:57 · answer #7 · answered by Shelby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it your very good
2006-07-15 10:37:55 · answer #8 · answered by chieriog 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thumbs up, all the way!!! :) -Ash
2006-07-19 12:26:36 · answer #9 · answered by Sumara 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is okay - but I'm not really into poetry
2006-07-15 10:33:25 · answer #10 · answered by Zooboomafoo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋