Barricades dare not hold me back,
Even if they're a ten feet stack.
Mile long roads, I'd walk each one,
Yield signs, stop signs; I shall run.
Voltaged fences, I shall climb,
All with pride if you'd be mine.
Locks and chains; I'd break right through,
Excluding tools; my hands will do.
Nothing stops a willful mind, no
Torment of the strongest kind.
Increase the pain, love bares it all,
Needless torture; price is small.
Excaped from all the pain afflicted,
I'd find you..just as predicted.
MY VALENTINE...BE MINE.
2006-07-13 13:30:25 · 13 answers · asked by Poetic Justice 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
You definitely put your heart and thought into it. That's what makes a poem good. I like it. Now if you don't mind telling me, who are you and how did you think up this wonderful poem?
2006-07-13 13:34:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Check out mine on poetry.com. Click poet and put in James Ozburn. The poem is called( Dreams). I wrote this poem back in 2002 for my wife and won an award for it.. Keep going and post your poem on poetry .com you may win something!!! Good Poem!!
2006-07-13 20:35:46 · answer #2 · answered by bren_jim 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!
Awesome talent you did a fantastic job!
Post more poems to rate when you get a chance I'd love to see more!
2006-07-13 20:35:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I realy like it is nice & a original poem, continue writing b/c i do too & the more you write the better & more passionate you can become.
2006-07-13 20:35:49 · answer #4 · answered by tigereyes2481 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really good! You have a true talent maybe you should grow up to be a poet?!?!
2006-07-13 20:33:51 · answer #5 · answered by jenna G 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good job! dont ever stop writing poetry you could probably make poetry books as you keep getting better and better
2006-07-13 20:32:20 · answer #6 · answered by Kacie H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is this you Allan? It's nice but long
2006-07-13 20:33:54 · answer #7 · answered by dangerously in love 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's great!
2006-07-13 20:34:20 · answer #8 · answered by cowgirl91 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my kind of thing ,it's good crazy but good. keep writing.
2006-07-13 20:36:55 · answer #9 · answered by daydreamer_bgi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great job
2006-07-13 20:52:15 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋