im starting to get the good parts down im about 10 pages into it i suck at discription and i need some scary gory and stuff like that
the story is about me and a cupple friends. our school and the rest of the US gets attacked by terrorist every one has teamed up against the US and i need some shocking little things to put in so help i need all the help i can get
2006-07-13 12:00:58 · 10 answers · asked by zombiekiller1992 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Maybe one of your teachers turns out to be one of the terrorists. And the teacher had been one of your favorites. How do you react to the knowledge that your teacher is anti-American?
2006-07-13 12:28:05 · answer #1 · answered by AJK 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Before you use any of these hints, I must give you this advice: while spellcheck on Microsoft Word and other similar programs can be helpful, don't rely too heavily upon it. This is because, while the programs are useful, they are not infallable, which means that if you have a typo that the computer interprets incorrectly, any suggestion you use for correction will make you look stupid. Try using a regular dictionary for spelling, and be sure to have someone (who reads/writes well) to proofread. But your plot is...well, DONE. Try something new, something of your own invention, perhaps?
2006-07-13 12:12:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't know enough about the way things to look in you story to give you a satisfactory written description. But, what works well for me, is sitting back with my eyes closed and visualizing the event happening. Then all you have to do is write it down. Hope I was some help. Good Luck.
2006-07-13 12:11:17 · answer #3 · answered by rookiewriter 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-14 10:46:55 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That sounds familiar. I think there was movie along those lines. It came out in the early 90's I think. It was called Red Dawn if I'm not mistaken. good luck.
2006-07-13 12:04:47 · answer #5 · answered by itsmeee2006 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
mmm...maybe you can make it so that one of your couple of friends run into a person--who you guys end up trusting and let that person into your team(?)--but suddenly you guys discover he's the traitor who was leaking information to the other side D:
lol I don't know but I know how fusterating it can get when making up a story ^-^ Good luck with it! :3
2006-07-13 12:04:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
learn how to spell before you try writing a story or a book
2006-07-13 12:07:55 · answer #7 · answered by loca420 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Look into history and news...the truth can be stranger than fiction!
2006-07-13 12:03:15 · answer #8 · answered by meeso12002 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
torturing terrorists that you have caught raping some chick
2006-07-13 12:05:17 · answer #9 · answered by brandon 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you've already asked this question. Time for bed now.
2006-07-13 12:04:53 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋