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The male went down somewhere in the high grass ahead of him and to the right. From his kneeling position, he had seen the legs for an instant above the grass as the big body rolled over on the ground. He could wait maybe five minutes.Then he would have to go in to finish the job. It would take only one round from the Manlicher, but as soon as he entered the high grass he would be vulnerable. Even if the big male was mortally hit, it might rise and make one last charge, and his aim would have to be perfect. He could feel the sweat trickle down his back under his shirt and wondered if it showed through the shirt where the Zubabi beaters behind him could see it. He waited. Then it was time, and he raised the Manlicher to his shoulder. Would his legs carry him, he wondered, as he rose to his feet.

2006-07-14 00:55:28 · answer #1 · answered by haroldpohl2000 4 · 7 3

Hemingway's style was short lines of dialog. You can't do that in a paragraph. Try learning more about your subject before you ask a dumb question. [Apologies to Hemingway.]

2006-07-13 08:42:50 · answer #2 · answered by thylawyer 7 · 1 0

If you have complex mind like myself it's hard. I mean it's hard to write simple sentences and at the same time be creative. I can only write in technical form only. I tried to write simple sentences and realized it does take certain ways of thinking to be creative. But I just do not have very much patience to learn to write in simple short sentences.

2006-07-13 08:48:59 · answer #3 · answered by FILO 6 · 0 0

The wind picked up, and the wind was strong, as strong as the men who worked in the fields who would come to the cafes on summer nights, to see the dancing girls on the boulevard. And they would drink the wine, dark and deep burgundies, and dream of fields of their own, with the dancing girls making dinner in as the sunsets.

2006-07-13 08:44:18 · answer #4 · answered by taishar68 2 · 0 0

I could but I much prefer to write in my own original style.

2006-07-13 08:44:10 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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