what can you say about this poem i made?

Question

Wonder
Far away eyes...
Tear stained faces.
Aching hearts, and
Young minds, always asking,
Why?
Quiet worries,
Poems, flowers,
Shock.
And here we are, still asking...
Why?

Your beautiful souls,
Shining from heaven,
Just as they did for us each day.
Only then, they were hidden.
But now they are free; eternally happy, always...
As you dance relentlessly across our thoughts,
Our emotions,
Our spirits.
Perhaps we may come to suddenly realize,
Maybe they need you up there.
Up there, where you can flourish in your infinite, unending beauty,
And the meaning of your true worth will be fully understood.

We will always miss you.
We will always need you.
And as we learn to deal with our grief,
Not knowing how long it will take,
Perhaps, one day, we will wake up-
And the hurt is gone.
And we will finally,
Truthfully,
Honestly know,
Why.

Answer 1

A very well written poem with deep emotional feelings, Keep on writing and let your feelings flows from your heart.

Answer 2

if someone asked me to type how i felt when my family died i would have typed
Wonder
Far away eyes...
Tear stained faces.
Aching hearts, and
Young minds, always asking,
Why?
Quiet worries,
Poems, flowers,
Shock.
And here we are, still asking...
Why?

Your beautiful souls,
Shining from heaven,
Just as they did for us each day.
Only then, they were hidden.
But now they are free; eternally happy, always...
As you dance relentlessly across our thoughts,
Our emotions,
Our spirits.
Perhaps we may come to suddenly realize,
Maybe they need you up there.
Up there, where you can flourish in your infinite, unending beauty,
And the meaning of your true worth will be fully understood.

We will always miss you.
We will always need you.
And as we learn to deal with our grief,
Not knowing how long it will take,
Perhaps, one day, we will wake up-
And the hurt is gone.
And we will finally,
Truthfully,
Honestly know,
Why.

thank you for opening my eyes

: ' )

Answer 3

I like it. I think a poem is all abt saying something, but having ur audience draw it out. What i understand is that this is abt how humans question death? How we never understand and accept it?
I like the 17th stanza... "As you dance relentlessly across our thoughts"

Answer 4

You're just as deep as the other million emo kids on the net

Answer 5

It was great and could be very inspirational to anyone who has lost a loved one.

Answer 6

I like it.It is very tense till the end so it keeps your attention.Go on with writing :)

Answer 7

frstly u didnt make it
u wrote it
it was too cool
and u can mail it to me on my account
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Answer 8

ok that was sosososososo beautiful.i write peotry too

Answer 9

it is sooooooooooooo great realy .. so meaningfull ,, so rich in feeling ,,, so deep

Answer 10

nice poem.