True feelings
I guess you’ll never know that I loved you so!
I wish I could tell you how I feel for you. But I
can’t wait forever. I’m tired of being alone. I’m
tired of thinking of you every day. But I
guess we’ll be friends. I trusted you to
be there for me, to let me tell you what I’m
going through. But when I’m near you I feel
like it’s just you and me, like nothing matters.
It’s like I could talk to you forever. But I’ll
deny the truth if it means staying friends
with you. My true feelings for you, you’ll never
know. I’ll move on one day. I’ll keep in
touch with you over the years, because
you’re important to me. You were someone
who could make me smile when
I was sad. You were the guy that was sweet
and funny. I guess I’ll never know how
you felt about me.
Repeated 2 times
( and be honest!!!) :)
2006-07-12 17:37:48 · 13 answers · asked by capiacorn5813 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It's hard fo rme to judge a song because I am so into the music aspect of it, but yeah. It's ok. Not really bad, but not good either. It just lacks... a new idea, something interesting. It just seems so simple that it is something that is said over and over the same way. Find a new way to express the same message. I'm not trying to discourage you, but you asked for honesty and I think it is great that you are writing songs! Good luck!
2006-07-12 17:43:35 · answer #1 · answered by Alex R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a beautiful song, it really tells how you feel. Why can't you turn this into a letter and write it to the person it is about. It makes me feel so sad...
2006-07-12 17:44:54 · answer #2 · answered by kb 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The song that you wrote, is good it sounds like something that I have went through and felt, so keep up writing songs
2006-07-12 17:47:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Story of my life.
2006-07-12 17:47:13 · answer #4 · answered by Quiet Amusement 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very sad, but good writing!
2006-07-12 17:41:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really depressing, and not very good. Don't give up your day job.
2006-07-13 04:12:24 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's okay, but I hear songs like this all the time.
2006-07-12 17:41:08 · answer #7 · answered by simply wonderful. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your question is posted in a wrong section.. :D
2006-07-12 18:09:03 · answer #8 · answered by savedbymercy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a better blog than song.
Too much 'I' to be interesting.
2006-07-12 17:42:49 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
dude, you need to get some trim and in a hurry.
2006-07-12 17:40:46 · answer #10 · answered by diaz276 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋