You never watch movies.
2006-07-12 17:26:15
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answer #1
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answered by LORD Z 7
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Ryan Phillipe, Cruel Intentions.
2006-07-12 17:28:30
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answered by musicgrlluvher 5
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Michael Landon
2006-07-12 17:38:54
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answered by kb 4
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Orlando Bloom
2006-07-12 17:24:09
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answered by carolina 3
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Bradd Pitt-- 12 Monkeys
2006-07-12 19:58:02
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answer #5
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answered by Anonymous
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Antonio Banderas or Orlando Bloom
2006-07-12 17:29:15
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answer #6
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answered by d4wn4j3sus 2
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Johny Depp
2006-07-12 17:24:07
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answer #7
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answered by Chris h 2
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Adam Sandler ... 50 First Dates
2006-07-12 17:30:22
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answer #8
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answered by Raffy_AdAstra 3
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that is totally melodramatic. undecided if that's what you have been proceeding. yet you ought to truly shorten issues up slightly in case you had to. dying scenes are rarely even very good whilst the reader hasn't seen something in the previous them. actual, i come across it tricky to care approximately the two human beings on your writing whilst i do no longer additionally be conscious of them. sure, that is totally unhappy, in the way it somewhat is once you notice a lifeless canine on the component of the line yet shop on using. It would not create an enduring impression, as a results of fact the reader hasn't lost an ingredient to themselves the way they are able to whilst a character they be conscious of and love dies. you employ too many commas. "Her long black, hair coated his nonetheless face, tears welling from her darkish eyes." is incorrect grammar. while you're attempting to make the reader sense unhappy, comprise much less of what is going on and greater of what the characters are feeling. asserting that "she wept" and then a itemizing of issues she wept approximately isn't sufficient. So, attempt to decrease down on each and every of the elaborate stuff and make it concise, yet greater uncooked. i think of that it may be harder than burying the physique only like that for a individual who only lost the guy she enjoyed. i be conscious of if that occurred to me, i does no longer have the dedication or the capability. The area after the dying scene is slightly greater effective, as a results of fact its obtrusive which you're telling it from a storyteller's point of view. yet you are able to no longer in basic terms leap like that. you're able to desire to be storytelling for the whole component, or following your character for the whole component.
2016-12-10 05:52:35
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answer #9
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answered by schluckerbier 4
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Jake Gyllenhal
That cowboy movie
2006-07-12 17:59:40
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answer #10
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answered by Hannah 3
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Poltergeist - Craig T. Nelson
2006-07-12 17:34:44
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answer #11
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answered by Kryztal 5
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