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2006-07-12 13:43:12 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
i wish i could write like that!
2006-07-12 13:56:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 2⤋
The first two paragraphs are good but not the last one.
2006-07-12 21:03:00 · answer #2 · answered by kool_aid 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I do. But it's almost a diary entery. Still good and likable, though.
2006-07-12 20:50:32 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah especially the end. the beginning gets a little cliche. veryyyy good ending thoughh =].
2006-07-12 20:46:35 · answer #4 · answered by nikki 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No...too dark. Write about something that makes you feel good...
2006-07-12 20:47:48 · answer #5 · answered by Outman 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like that second verse. Keep it up.
2006-07-12 20:48:54 · answer #6 · answered by sean1201 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah like it. it is kinda good you know. i liked it.
2006-07-13 14:02:39 · answer #7 · answered by I Luv Joel Madden!! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋