The Day Has Come
the day has come for our love to die.
our hearts to ache and our souls to cry
the day has come for us to separate
this day has come much to late.
the day has come for us to feel pain.
pain that may drive the both of us insane.
the day has come for us to forget.
but to forget you would be my biggest regret.
the day has come for our dreams to
be lost and our hopes to fly.
the day has come for our love to die.
2006-07-12 11:27:39 · 11 answers · asked by legs 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Sorry But i must say that this is about the worst poem I have ever read in my life. The devil doth hath unto to thee its horried and demented face begot.
2006-07-12 11:32:46 · answer #1 · answered by Zidane 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The day has come to ignore your brother
the day has come to find another
appreciating a poem is like a gentle kiss
easy for a bully to make fun and miss
so I hope that as the time goes by
a new love will fill your gentle sky
Keep Smilin'
2006-07-12 19:04:41 · answer #2 · answered by HANAN. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Legs, keep walking until you find your calling. You keep writing like this and The Day Will Come when people will be running and jumping off cliffs to get away from the pain your writing causes. Now go kiss your brother. (smile)
2006-07-12 18:39:18 · answer #3 · answered by reoriver 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hate to hear your heart ache and souls cry
I hate your pain and days makes you insane
I hate your dreams lost and hopes to fly
But the day has come for our love to die...
in short, keep on!!!
2006-07-12 18:37:41 · answer #4 · answered by wacky_racer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The emotional content is pretty strong, and the theme of loss and pain is clearly conveyed. The lauguage itself is a little spare for me. Still I think it is a quality effort as far a poetry goes.
2006-07-12 18:33:46 · answer #5 · answered by MattCan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is beautiful and don't let anyone tell you any diffrent. I always look at poems as a way to express your feelings and I sound all mushy...lol either way I love it
2006-07-12 18:32:46 · answer #6 · answered by meltingpoint15 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a sad poem, but good writing! Keep it up!
2006-07-12 18:31:58 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
do u like it? if so why do you care about what others say?....anyway it`s a beautiful poem
2006-07-12 18:40:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
HAHAHAHA, Props to your brother.
2006-07-12 18:30:47 · answer #9 · answered by oranjeesoccer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful......( don't listen to your brother)
2006-07-12 18:32:19 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋