- My name is Brooke XXXX. I am 14, soon to be 15
- Babysitting children for about 3 years.
- Baby-sit children 10 months-10 years
- Live nearby in XXXXX Knolls
- I am trustworthy, honest, reliable, loyal, responsible, and a great babysitter
- I have general knowledge through a special class in school in first aid, CPR, and babysitting (infants and children) and will soon be certified!
- I am available most days throughout the week after 1:00 PM and weekends all day and I am also available when school starts. Call me to see when I am available.
- I am negotiable on the price per hour, pet friendly, and will give 100% full attention to your kids.
- I will also bring small, non-messy activities for the children to do (coloring, games, etc.)
- Will do small house work like cleaning.
- I am willing to work anywhere in the XXXXX area
Contact me for more information or questions at…
I am looking forward to hear from you soon!
2006-07-12 11:17:02 · 9 answers · asked by xoxo 3 in Business & Finance ➔ Small Business
I would hire you...but you should be sure to charge extra for cleaning.
2006-07-12 11:20:19 · answer #1 · answered by toe poe gee gee oh 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Hola YoMama,
You include many things in your flyer but you go off topic. You sound very responsible for 14 almost 15. Write your flyer like a resume it would make you look even more mature. But make a playful border so that parents get the feeling you are responsible yet playful. Another thing coloring can be a messy activity if kids start writing on the wall. Don't offer to do housework because then you aren't giving 100% attention to the kids.
Name, Address, Email, Phone# centered at the top
Education
Experience
Certification
Skills
Hours and Days Available
References
2006-07-12 11:31:56 · answer #2 · answered by Maestra 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the content of you're flyer is nice! But maybe try to make it more 'personal' like:
Looking for a babysitter?
I am ....
Where am I available?
...
What can I offer your kids?
...put all your experience information in here, the classes you had and what 'extra effort' you are willing to bring (coloring, games..)...keywords only...
What time can I babysit?
...
I am looking forward to hear from you
your number/time people can call you
The reason why I would do it like that is (or somehow like that), I think, that's how people would ask you, if they stood right in front of you. You already put the most important information on your flyer, but it's too much text. People get tired of reading, if they want just information! This way it's more catchy, it contains everything parents have to know about you and by the question-answer-way they are able to look for the information they want easier....
Hope I could help you a bit! :)
2006-07-12 11:36:13 · answer #3 · answered by shivababe69 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can tell you worked very hard on this and you should be very proud of yourself. Unfortunately, we live in a dangerous world for young ladies in your age group. Word of mouth is your best friend. There is always someone out there that needs a good, reliable babysitter. What you could do is simply post a phone number advertising services without any details. You will have to "interview" them as well as they do you...and you might want to get your Mom or someone you trust to help you with that part of it, 'kay?. You sound like a real nice girl. Good Luck to you.
2006-07-12 11:27:29 · answer #4 · answered by riverhawthorne 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good! Give a price range on how much you usually charge. I know you mentioned "I am negotiable on the price per hour", but it does not give a standing price to start the negotiating.
Good luck!!!
2006-07-12 11:21:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There might be one little problem,about the years experience,you need to be 14 to baby sit.you ask for opinion it looks good,but you might want to think it over first,and you might want to change something,but I'm sure you will get other opinion.
2006-07-12 11:29:43 · answer #6 · answered by what is the good word? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Will you please ask your parents or your teacher for help with this?
Also check with them to see if they think it is a good idea for you to be posting what you did.
(It isn't- they can explain why to you).
Good luck.
2006-07-12 11:19:57 · answer #7 · answered by cigarnation 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
do you want 2 babysit for my mom and i live in savannah,Georgia
2006-07-12 11:24:10 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's perfect!!!!!!
2006-07-12 11:20:16 · answer #9 · answered by peaches 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋