I'm trying to let go of the woman I loved. I think My poetry portrays my hurt and dismay?

Question

She is from Magnolia.
where life is a drag.
I thought she was an angel
she turned into a hag

She promised to love me
Forever she said
Then one day she told me
she asked another to bed.

She said she was sorry
but I was to blame
Then she told me
she didn't know his name


The day that she met him
he was at the holiday inn
that's where they committed
the adulterous sin

The sex was not great
she was not selected
The time he was inside
She was unprotected

She wanted to know
if she was good or not.
Now she has put me
in a precarious spot.

The family we made
is no longer there.
The joys of a father
she'll choose another to share

I loved that woman
i'm behind in the score.
the wife that I loved
turned into a whore

I'm over her now
I'm throwing a bash
I'm finally over her
That white trailer trash.

Answer 1

Thats pretty good. sad and funny...well i'm sure its not at all funny for you. Sorry for your experience, maybe you should pursue writing??? start a line of greeting cards. good luck to you.

Answer 2

This poetry is lame*ss
It really sucks
Just like the woman at the Holiday Inn
Who guzzled my nuts

I didn't know her
But it became real clear
Just what she could do
After a beer

I used that broad
On the bed and the floor
When I finished
I showed her the door

Answer 3

This is actually a very creative way to understand your emotions and help to heal your hurt. You will come out a better person in doing this....to paraphrase Nietzsche "what doesn't destroy me, makes me stronger". Good luck to you.

Answer 4

Wow. Very deep and filled with hate, sorry for the loss but it's good that you moved on.

Answer 5

You posted another poem yesterday, which little more romantic. Do you write these yourself?

Answer 6

yep it does. good luck

Answer 7

I don't read poetry.