You are my Dream
You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
I would like to talk with any girl my age (13-16) who likes my poem.
2006-07-12 03:40:46 · 25 answers · asked by Anonymous in Beauty & Style ➔ Other - Beauty & Style
your poem is great!!...im 14...do you know who youre taling about in the poem?
2006-07-12 03:44:59 · answer #1 · answered by deziiarnez1114 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am 13. Awww! Your poem is really sweet, I never knew that there was actually a guy out there that caring and thoughtful! You should enter it in Chicken Soup For a Teens Soul or something.
2006-07-12 10:47:59 · answer #2 · answered by Lisa V 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I´m not in the 13-16 age, and yours is not exactly a question but...
I think it´s nice to see a man talking this way about women and, besides, having a careful writing (using capital letters, good orthography!)
Thanks!
2006-07-12 10:49:55 · answer #3 · answered by Mariela 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love ur poem if ur 14-16 i will tlk 2 u im 14 my id is sassy_angel_2010 hope 2 tlk 2 u.
2006-07-12 10:44:40 · answer #4 · answered by Angel 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm too old but someday you will be a very good husband and I hope in the meantime you find a good girl who values your sweetness
2006-07-12 10:45:22 · answer #5 · answered by me 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was so cute and special. i hope you find a lovely lady to read this poem too. sorry but iam too old but i have a 12 year old daughter...
2006-07-12 10:44:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is sweet my love but your just too young sorry.
2006-07-12 10:46:30 · answer #7 · answered by VANILLA 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not saying your poem isnt nice... but any 13-16 year old girl who responds is stupid because for all we know you are a 58 year old pot belly sweat stained t-shirt man with big man boobs and greasy looking type who is into young girls....
2006-07-12 10:45:10 · answer #8 · answered by CF_ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great poem!! It's really sweet. You will find your special someone someday. :-D. Im too old for you, though.SORRY!
2006-07-12 10:44:24 · answer #9 · answered by Kee-Kee 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a very nice poem.....wish i was b/w 13 - 16.....but IM 17....
2006-07-12 10:55:32 · answer #10 · answered by SARA H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋