My thoughts and theory's, " The Day was Breaking " Lolled in the shade down in the glade, Flourishing in the Hedgerows, the live and crushed Nettles. The Blackberry Espaliers Echeloned along the bank, Berries spewing forth from their Prickly limbs. A Fish, A Bear, A Cat, A Mouse, An Hunter, A Fly, Swiftness of a Tigress. Your thought's very welcome.
2006-07-12 01:35:10 · 4 answers · asked by jambojersey1939 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I love it!!!Im not expert,but I believe you have real talent.I was almost there reading it,lol.Keep writing.
2006-07-12 01:47:00 · answer #1 · answered by khamm12001 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I wouldn't eat berries if they were spewing forth but some of it is very nice. I love poetry
2006-07-12 08:52:02 · answer #2 · answered by poppy vox 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you need to read more poetry first. That's one of the best ways I know to train your brain as it were. Your words to me sound a bit forced.
2006-07-12 08:41:39 · answer #3 · answered by quikzip7 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like "An Hunter." Don't see that much anymore.
2006-07-12 13:51:29 · answer #4 · answered by haroldpohl2000 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋