hey guys this is the lyrics.. to my song......=D
-Soun
he was under the sun and i was under the moon
i thought we were opposites it was doom
but then i saw i was wrong and that i had to be strong
or else i wouldnt have this guys.... it was you
did you realize that your love was so strong or were you like me
and thought you were wrong but whatever the case
i hope that you know.. im not the girl you think and it will not show........
my heart is full but my mind says no
and if i see ur a fake oh for god's sake..... no
we were never meant to be together and i hope you know that were over............
-swe3tkiis
2006-07-11 19:11:00 · 13 answers · asked by swe3tkiis 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
btw...... i know it sounds kinda bad......... but thats just because you havent heard the music yet.... its kinda rocky(ish)....
its alot like avril lavigne's song....sk8er boi
2006-07-11 19:31:00 · update #1
sounds pretty good! for just reading lyrics! can't really judge totally without hearing the music! Kudos to you for writing it!!!!! i used to write songs mysef! but i never showed them to anyone because i didn't want negative feedback or to be laughed at!
2006-07-13 17:28:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very interesting lyrics! Love them.... But it depends on the music you put with them. Keep up the good work
2006-07-11 19:21:59 · answer #2 · answered by kc9music 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good lyrics. i've learned to read lyrics as poems, not as songs, because that's kind of what they are. and it's a gr8 poem. you suggested it was kinda like sk8rboi, and i totlly see the connection. like most songs, i'm sure it will sound better with music and your voice.
2006-07-11 19:44:38 · answer #3 · answered by spikibracelet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the first line, but the rest isn't really spectacular. Might depend on the music with it??
2006-07-11 19:16:02 · answer #4 · answered by kelguire 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty cool. Someone might steal it. It is hot in the punk rock way. Sweet!
2006-07-11 20:53:20 · answer #5 · answered by soulfli 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its ok
little not so wow factor
im a writer
it needs more format
and it does just ramble on
it needs more verses and it needs a chorus
think on it a little more
and make it more wow
but it is ok right now
work on it
get back to me
2006-07-11 19:29:51 · answer #6 · answered by hollywoodxrejectx 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not so great...kinda rambles on. I hope the actual music is better.
Sorry...
2006-07-11 19:19:16 · answer #7 · answered by Tuckstop 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awww how sweet
best song ever
I'm impressed
Good job !
2006-07-11 19:15:09 · answer #8 · answered by ?heartthrob? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hello,
My avatar likes it...
And wants to take your avatar out for lunch...
2006-07-11 19:17:34 · answer #9 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good rhyming and verse's but wheres the chorus's
2006-07-11 19:28:50 · answer #10 · answered by Mr. Boodle McNoodle 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋