welll its abt a girl that that dont have friends and she some how find s someone but shes changeing her self and her personality to let that other person be her friend but later in the story she realises that the person is trying to teach her that its not goood trying to chnage ur self to let someonme like you.And she learns that she has to be herself to know the true and real meaning of freindship.
2006-07-11 08:12:03 · 7 answers · asked by ana 1 in Beauty & Style ➔ Other - Beauty & Style
Wow, it's very original! Your spelling rocks, too! <3 <3 <3
2006-07-11 08:15:41 · answer #1 · answered by teh_sexi_hotttie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I recommend you start by examining your grammar. Your question is written without distinct sentences, capitol letters, or punctuation. Now you may not want your characters to speak in proper English, but the text around the dialog should be standard English. For a good example of colloquial English used in a story I recommend "Huckleberry Finn". Also a good style manual like the "MLA Handbook" could be useful.
2006-07-11 15:23:36 · answer #2 · answered by Olwen C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what kind of help do u need. U hv a wonderful idea, elaborate on it. Your message is so clear (in the last line).
Love
2006-07-11 15:23:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey chap I'm not impressed, add some spice
2006-07-11 15:19:58 · answer #4 · answered by manoj 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just be straight with this gal instead of all this trickery
2006-07-11 15:19:30 · answer #5 · answered by pycosal 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Learn how to spell first, then I will help you.
2006-07-11 15:16:43 · answer #6 · answered by athleticsfan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
add a lot of more deatil
2006-07-11 15:15:39 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋