The mansion had an erie quality about it. As Johnny drew closer, he bagan to see strange things.
2006-07-11 05:08:27 · 8 answers · asked by Mama R 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
A compilation of the previous posts plus a few lines by me. My part starts with the mansion dropped and ends at over his head.
Maybe the next person can add a few more that make sense and keep the story going.
The mansion had an eerie quality about it. As Johnny drew closer, he began to see strange things.
He saw what appeared to be a bright flower growing alone in the middle of an obviously neglected and overgrown garden.
No more drugs for me, Johnny said to himself as the mansion slowly lifted up and floated away.
As Johnny approached his skin tingled and he could make little sense of what he saw.
The mansion dropped back onto its foundation with a thud.
In the window a figure bathed in white light drifted past then slipped back into the shadows before Johnny could be sure it was ever there.
He reached out to turn the door handle and the porch light shattered over his head.
"I shouldn't be here," Johnny said aloud, trying not to shiver against the repressive, ominous silence all around him. His family would start looking for him soon. He had just had yet another argument with his parents. It had been over something stupid, and he had stomped away from the house.
Now, Johnny looked up at the strange mansion before him. He hadn't known this thing was so close to his own house. Suddenly the sound of wailing rent the air, and Johnny spun about, terrified. "Who's there?!" he cried.
2006-07-11 06:21:24 · answer #1 · answered by sp_isme 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
"I shouldn't be here," Johnny said aloud, trying not to shiver against the repressive, ominous silence all around him. His family would start looking for him soon. He had just had yet another argument with his parents. It had been over something stupid, and he had stomped away from the house. Now, Johnny looked up at the strange mansion before him. He hadn't known this thing was so close to his own house. Suddenly the sound of wailing rent the air, and Johnny spun about, terrified. "Who's there?!" he cried.
2006-07-11 12:37:03 · answer #2 · answered by xXPolitically IncorrectXx 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No more drugs for me, Johnny said to himself as the mansion slowly lifted up and floated away. Johnny shook his head a few times to clear his mind and then went back into the hospital and continued where he had left off carrying out the brain transplant operation. Nice to see you've come back, Doctor, said nurse Nancy with a bit of a wink.
2006-07-11 12:15:21 · answer #3 · answered by Gallivanting Galactic Gadfly 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Post by sp_isme cont'd:
But all he heard was silence. He stood still for a moment and heard a sniffling sound.
He crept into the line of trees directly in front of him. It seemed unnaturally dark. Johnny squinted hard and thought he spotted a bit of white. He walked toward it. A girl was lying on the ground. He stepped towards her.
The girl gasped and crept deeper in the shadows.
Johnny heard a timid voice whisper, "Who are you? Did they send you to come find me?"
2006-07-11 14:30:03 · answer #4 · answered by Carlito Sway 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Carlito Sway contd.
johnny replied,"i dont know what ur talking about miss...i have been sent by no one...who are the they you are talking about...what is your problem...is someone after you....then why are you lying around here...you should be on the run...just like me...i'm also running...running away from my past,my shadow...we can make a good couple...say you wanna come with me...we'll have fun...i'l be the king ul be my queen and we'll live in this mansion happily ever after as they say in those tales...will you...will you"
2006-07-12 04:47:46 · answer #5 · answered by ramesh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was a dark and stormy night, of course...but how about:
The mansion loomed eerily. As Johnny approached his skin tingled and he could make little sense of what he saw.
2006-07-11 12:20:44 · answer #6 · answered by Giraffe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He saw what appeared to be a bright flower growing alone in the middle of an obviosly neglected and overgrown garden.
2006-07-11 12:14:24 · answer #7 · answered by Jo CB 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm really not sure what you want here. Do you want somebody to add to what you've started? Is this "name where that line came from"?
2006-07-11 12:14:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋