From the moment we first met…A feeling came over me that I will never forget.
A feeling so strong and true, a feeling unlike anything I ever knew.
….moments of pure bliss
Each and every day we spend together…we are entangled in loves grasp.
Whispering sweet nothings and promising each other it will always last.
….moments of pure bliss
The love we feel for one another continues to grow…without ends or boundaries as to how far we can go.
With each passing day together we constantly mold and our story together will one day be told.
….moments of pure bliss
On a sea of dreams, I chart the course of my life…guided solely by the stars in your eyes.
A lifetime of love is what I promise to give…together as one we shall always live.
….moments of pure bliss
And when we grow old and look back at our life and think of all the wonderful times we miss,
We will describe our life’s story as moments of pure bliss!
2006-07-10 22:09:50 · 10 answers · asked by ? 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Beautiful
2006-07-18 07:35:43 · answer #1 · answered by Padme 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty cool ace. but just a thought, like most mushy poetry. it's a teed bit myopic. we, as humans have a tendency to overestimate this wild animal called love. we don't realize that it can't be tamed and that there never is really something called 'bliss', not on this earth anyway.
nevertheless, a pretty cool poem. cheers.
2006-07-10 22:20:49 · answer #2 · answered by magnus 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the most beautiful thing i have ever had the pleasure to have read i am feeling down but after reading this poem i feel on top of the world thank you
2006-07-10 22:17:26 · answer #3 · answered by happyphilthedill 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow...that is a beautiful poem! Wondering who the author is now!
2006-07-10 22:17:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
To express the feelings there would be language., To express our life there would be this poem. Its not excellent it is above that feeling
2006-07-11 00:28:50 · answer #5 · answered by JJ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well ..(dawg) he he......I LOVE YOU!!! and this is the most beautiful poem that you could've ever wrote for ME....Baby ur simply amazing...thank you so much for just being YOU!
2006-07-13 13:58:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's actually pretty cool, creative and thoughtful
2006-07-10 22:14:29 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful, I love it !!
2006-07-10 22:12:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice one
2006-07-10 22:46:00 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
like it yea i like it
2006-07-10 22:14:45 · answer #10 · answered by we_c_it 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋