this one's unfinished
Title: PURPLISH COW
In my bed,
Down I lay,
Thinking a poem,
To write, to say.
I open the window,
fresh breezes blow in.
I sit, I think,
I scratch my chin.
I can't write a poem,
at least, not now.
For outside, I see,
A purplish cow.
Sit up. Jump up.
Look up to the sky!
The purplish cow
went floating on by!
His huge white wings,
pumping the air,
Giving the town
An awful scare.
2006-07-10 15:28:51 · 23 answers · asked by Inimitable_Elucidator 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Keep writing and thinking!!!
God is on your side!!!
2006-07-10 15:35:27 · answer #1 · answered by picasso 2 · 6⤊ 4⤋
Is the purplish cow rabid and foaming at the mouth? Why is he giving the town a scare if you're not scared and scratching your chin? I would say change the ending to be more magical and mystical than just the town was scared...
His huge white wings,
pumping the air,
making the town folks
awake and stare...
Where did this cow appear
for what is that in it's rear?
It looks like purple droppings for sure
but then again, it could just be manure...
2006-07-10 15:35:36 · answer #2 · answered by DarthFangNutts 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lol purplish cow I like it it's funny I agree with whoever said it would make a good children's book. It's got that feel to it :)
Iagree with what this person said...its funny, it would make a good children's book...yes...i am a booy and i think it is good and i think personally that poems are pretty boring and plus...i got a little book that has some poems in that was published and made into a book and i made the poems in school...then we sent it to a publishing company...preety kool poem...answer your questions later...bye.
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2006-07-10 15:58:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey Gal, That poem is really nice..
I got a suggestion for you.. In some Magazines, they ask you to send poems into them and if they are any good, the SAY that they will pay you.. ANY TIME you publish a poem, and some person that writes songs sees it, he might grab it and say that he or she wrote it and make mucho money. Always see about getting it copywrited before sending or publishing anything..
2006-07-10 15:36:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lol purplish cow I like it it's funny I agree with whoever said it would make a good children's book. It's got that feel to it :)
2006-07-10 15:33:05 · answer #5 · answered by miss_gem_01 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very fine poem, a very fine poem indeed! I can't wait to see the end of it.
2006-07-10 15:39:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep doing this kind of brainstroming and you'll come up with something great soon.
2006-07-10 15:33:21 · answer #7 · answered by momof3boyz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was a good poem keep on writting them. Good Luck!
2006-07-10 15:35:21 · answer #8 · answered by Dae Dae 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet ! Cute ! I like the honesty in it
2006-07-10 15:32:11 · answer #9 · answered by yodeladyhoo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry hon,but this poem does not makes any sense at all....try again when you are more inspired...
2006-07-10 15:32:47 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem
2006-07-10 15:32:03 · answer #11 · answered by snicker_bar92 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋