fear , we all know ,'FEAR ' my new poem , what do you think ?

Question

FEAR

This is fear based world
it is every where,
but,but,but,
not the only thing that dewells,
for centuries we survied,
became most evolved species

crave for attention
perform different acts
followed by appreciation,praise
for every step you move
depending up on audiance.

something comes in your way
it's named most mystrious names
always holding you back
but it is still masked
who masked it?
who is more powerful than it?
isn't it a more logical question?

Answer 1

as a hobby, i write stories. i enjoy just writing my thoughts down in my journal. yuor poetry is very good!!!! keep on going!!!!!!!!! justicejamie888

Answer 2

Poems arent something to judge, but I just wanna say Fear is something you build inside out of protection because its lack of facts and education to handle the things you fear. See for example, some people dont have fear for snakes and some others do, so it all depends on you.. if you know what I mean.. I'm not so good at explaining things..

Answer 3

You should make it into a performance poem and find a place to perform. You could get the whole audience involved by chanting fear, fear, fear, the whole time. This could really be spooky fun.

Answer 4

Nice

Answer 5

write a song instead

Answer 6

its better than i would have done