i kinda like this girl...its not really a poem, just some thoughts...
***who is this girl that has kept my mind and heart in complete wonder? i scarcely know a thing about her, yet i'm stumbling upon reason after reason to find her out. oh, her laughter, that composes a gorgeous smile that expands softly across her face, rings out like that of an angel's song. how i wish she'd discern my adoration for her eyes that are gentler than the summer morning breeze surfing across the sands of a calm desert shore. the image of her standing there with her hair behind her and the colors of the sunset decorating her glowing skin is one of which i would hope to not imagine some day but rather set my eyes on. so, who is this girl that is even still keeping my mind and always my heart in complete attentitive wonder?****
what do you think?
2006-07-10 05:05:11 · 13 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Well your thoughts are amazing, that was really beautiful and i really liked it. WOW!! : )
Definitely Worth My Time
2006-07-10 05:14:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
This is a very sweet poem. I think if you gave it to her, she would be flattered to know that you think of her this way. And who knows, maybe she feels the same about you and doesn't know quiet how to tell you.
2006-07-10 12:13:23 · answer #2 · answered by Dorah C 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You got it bad. Good Job. Keep writing, and I hope you two can get together soon.
2006-07-10 12:18:19 · answer #3 · answered by crystalb 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm answering just for 2 pts!!!!
Actually a good poem!
2006-07-10 12:30:44 · answer #4 · answered by Patrick Mondal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked your thoughts. Romantic, Keep it up most girls love that stuff.
2006-07-10 12:12:13 · answer #5 · answered by imjstagrl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, give it to the girl
2006-07-10 12:09:48 · answer #6 · answered by blue_jeannes2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amazing look into your heart...Keep on writing...
2006-07-10 12:22:37 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
send this poetry to the gal
2006-07-10 12:12:29 · answer #8 · answered by dev 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good
2006-07-10 12:41:19 · answer #9 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, i'm awe struck. it reminds me of emery's "fractions". great writing kid, keep it up. God bless u.
2006-07-10 12:09:38 · answer #10 · answered by 3 nails 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋