i write songs and i need some opinions....this is oneso far, do ya like it?
When u and me were 2gether, i thought that this cant get any better
You and me were the perfect pair, But now i finaly realize what we had was never there.
CHORUS
Now all i have is an empty heart, seems like everything is falling apart, u were like my dream come true, u said "i promise 2 allways luv u", never thought u would do me this way, youv'e left my heart empty today!
2006-07-10 02:24:41 · 18 answers · asked by sam L 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
this song i have just wrote so i need ur opinions plz and thnx
2006-07-14 06:40:34 · update #1
The tears will fall, my smile will frown,
You've turned my heart upside down.
My heart is hurt this much is true,
In time I know I'll be over you.
Just made this up hope it adds to your song..
2006-07-10 02:32:12 · answer #1 · answered by Jojo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Decent
2006-07-10 02:27:22 · answer #2 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it alot i write a little too and that is really good what kinda beat do you have for it? i have a keyboard with a drum beat and i try to keep a beat it helps with the creative process i think rock on sweetie
2006-07-10 02:28:38 · answer #3 · answered by doodle 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems good so far, I like it. Just needs to be a bit longer.
2006-07-10 02:30:18 · answer #4 · answered by Fantasy Kel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice creation, it seems dat u r deeply involve in it ,if u r feeling so den u realy in need of ur lovd ones,jst spend tim wid ur family n frnds n u'll b able to get out of it soon
2006-07-10 02:28:45 · answer #5 · answered by pranx 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good. Im a novelist, song writing isn't my thing. Sounds good though.
2006-07-10 02:26:57 · answer #6 · answered by HayB1982 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too poppy for me but the lyrics show promise. of course, it doesn't take much of that now days. look at jessica simpson. zip talent yet international superstar.
2006-07-10 02:32:07 · answer #7 · answered by vampgirlgcl27 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit corny...
You going to sing it to your bf or is it a Britney Spears type song?
2006-07-10 02:28:58 · answer #8 · answered by Chellie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I like it. I think I'm going to use it as a poem and read it to my ex boyfriend because that's exactly what I want to say to him. He he he!
2006-07-10 02:31:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love the chorus. The verse could use some work.
2006-07-10 02:28:49 · answer #10 · answered by thesweetestthings24 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋