ok this is the same song continued, tell me what you think?

Question

what did i do wrong
we weren't together very long
and i feel so sad, that what we had
is gone

As i walk down the street,
its you that i meet
theres so much i want to say
but you won't give me the time of day
you walk right on by
you don't even say hi

I used to love it when you
hold my hand
and tell me that you understand
but now its all in the past
what we had didn't last

youre feelings for me are no more
it was just my heart that you tore
but youll never again love me back
there are a few feelings that you lack

but i hate you for what you did
its like you went
and ran
and hid

but i still find that
youre always on my mind...

ummm yes i wrote it....this is like the ending for the song, and the first part is in another question... just saying if you want to read it

Answer 1

that's very beautiful song is u whom write it ?!!!and i want to say that's poem and not just song

Answer 2

Again it is very sweet,a good country song.

Answer 3

Sounds really good