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Tell me if you like this. Its fantasy-ish. Read this and tell me what you think:

The crimson sun rose rather slowly, giving light to the small village of Fira and the rest of the land called Hiemal. Fira, a once beauitful village, was dying like the rest of the world. Crops were never growing, no matter how much care was put into them. Animals were becoming more deadly and getting even closer to the village. Seemed like everyday another foolish adult or child that went out at night was killed by monsters.

2006-07-09 17:35:17 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

17 answers

That's pretty good. You do a great job with descriptions. Try stretching them out a little more. The better you describe something, the better a writer you are.

2006-07-09 17:37:59 · answer #1 · answered by ridgellsar 2 · 1 0

It's very good. Try different ways of writing the same pieces. You''ll come up with new ideas.

'A crimson morning sun rose slowly, giving a light across the land of Hiemal and to the small village called Fira. Fira, a once beautiful village, like the rest of the world, was dying. The fields were barren. Crops never growing no matter how much care was put to them. Animals were becoming more ferocious as their hunger brought them closer to the village. It seemed like everyday another foolish child or adult would venture out into the night, never to return.'

Etc...etc...

It's your story, you decide on the final outcome.
Good luck.

2006-07-10 16:20:38 · answer #2 · answered by downunder 2 · 0 0

Yes, I want to hear more about Fira. Sounds very interesting.

2006-07-09 17:39:02 · answer #3 · answered by SRS 2 · 0 0

Yes, it looks like you can create a compelling description of a place.

A pointer: Everyday is an adjective, used when you are talking about an "everyday event" or an "everyday dress." When you are talking about each and every day, use "every day." Most native English speakers get this wrong.

Writing is a lot of work, but if you are committed it can be a good career. It is very fulfilling.

2006-07-09 17:40:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

the sole answer to that question could be to start WRITING. :) What evokes me is my own mind's eye...tale recommendations that I create that i've got faith will make (or desire will make) memories which will entertain and pastime, a minimum of, *some* human beings. Write approximately what you have an pastime in. reliable recommendation from considered one of my favourite authors Mary Higgins Clark, is to write interior the genres you like to examine! i like drama, supernatural, secret, secret, and suspense with some apocalyptic sci-fi as properly. that's what I even tend to write. i'm additionally a poet. What hobbies me regarding poetry is the international around me--human nature and behaviour. Corruption and integrity. reliable and evil. Write out of your heart. Write out of your pastime. it particularly is the main suitable recommendation i supplies you.

2016-12-14 06:07:55 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

Based only on that its really impossible to tell if you should or shouldn't. Its up to YOU! If the words are in you and need to come out and that's what you'd like to do, then pursue it! Don't make such decisions based on anyone elses thoughts or perceptions of what you create. "Art" in all its forms is really a gift which the artisan creates and gives/presents to the world, you'r imagination isn't any worse than anyone elses! If that's your calling go for it!

2006-07-09 17:48:16 · answer #6 · answered by Izen G 5 · 0 0

very good!!!!

I think the name Fira for a town has been used before, though.

2006-07-10 13:55:36 · answer #7 · answered by she who is awesome 5 · 0 0

"Write without pay until somebody offers to pay you. If nobody offers within three years, sawing wood is what you were intended for." - Mark Twain

You seem to have a knack for creating beautiful imagery; this is true, but how are you at character development, originality, plot development, grammar & language, and above all self-dicipline?

2006-07-10 16:29:02 · answer #8 · answered by secrets_in_mind3 2 · 0 0

Go write an entire novel and then try to get it published. If it gets published, then I would recommend becoming a writer. If it doesn't, then you'll know how good your wrting is and how hard it is to be a writer and you'll be able to answer this for yourself.

2006-07-09 17:40:20 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I think you have a lot of potential. I am a writer myself, and my passion is to write about everything and anything. Don't limit yourself, experiment, and most of all, have fun!

2006-07-10 06:15:32 · answer #10 · answered by birch_dryad_warrior_5 1 · 0 0

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