The beautiful spring,
is my favourite season,
i dont know why but there must be a reason...
Watch the small small flower grow,
more grass for me to mow.
something i never want to go away,
i wish it would stay this way...
I sniff the the fresh spring breese,
the polon makes me sneese..
watch the eggs hatch,
something i had to catch,.
I watch the spring sun rise,
almost makes tears come to my eyes...
7:00 am i hear the birds wistle.
i pick the pretty thistle..
thats why spring is my favourite thing
2006-07-09 15:15:51 · 3 answers · asked by Paris 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
This would make a great children's poem. Don't take that wrong way. Writing for children is in many ways more difficult than writing for adults. I like the poem. Keep writing, and good luck. You write well.
2006-07-09 15:37:31 · answer #1 · answered by Mr. Grudge 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a very nice poem. You are very talented, just some words are misspelled. Like breeze, sneeze, whistle and favorite. I read the whole thing.
2006-07-09 22:24:15 · answer #2 · answered by Jennifer 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is cute.
I enjoy mowing grass too:)
2006-07-09 22:18:57 · answer #3 · answered by MaryBeth 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋