I don’t want to believe it was all for nothing
And just when I’ve convinced myself that it was
I see the signs all around me
Reminding me of all the things I loved about you
Then hope works its way back in
To a mind that was just so closed
To the idea of our ever meeting again
Yeah, I let it back in…if only for a moment
Love to daydream and imagine how I want it
Just when you feel so out of reach
In the blink of an eye my mind is in reverse
Then all of the memories come flooding back in
Reminding me of all the things I loved about you
You put up the blockade…put up the walls
Will my love be enough for the both of us ?
I keep hanging on…to what once used to be
But somehow got washed away
By the sudden coolness in your heart
By the casual goodbye you seemed to flaunt
Will we one day have our time ?
And will fate allow our crime ?
What is left between us ?
I don’t want to believe it’s nothing
2006-07-09 07:51:37 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
Its beautiful, keep writing. I would love to hear others.
Harrison
2006-07-09 07:56:36 · answer #1 · answered by Doc 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow. That was a deep poem. Obviously you are having problems with a man. I think you said in your poem that your feelings are going away and coming back and you want to have a relationship with this guy. Well, you should just talk to him and tel him how you feel about him and ask him how he feels about you and just see what happens with that. If you guys feel the same about eachother then you should get together.
2006-07-09 15:00:41 · answer #2 · answered by T 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That could B a really top-of-the-list song !!! Why dont u try sending it somewhere amybe u will B famous & u can say i inspired u 2 send ur song!!!! Go 2 my Q&A and contact me...
2006-07-09 14:55:55 · answer #3 · answered by XXX 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sucks.
2006-07-09 14:54:21 · answer #4 · answered by pritesh_patel52 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it alot it reminds me of what is happening to me right this second anyways mabye you should think of getting it published
2006-07-09 15:08:27 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh, babe, I'm so sorry. I can't believe I let you go. Will you please take me back? I promise I will make it up to you. Oh, wait, have we met? I don't even know you! Oh hell! Ok, I liked your poem.
2006-07-09 14:57:25 · answer #6 · answered by drummer4justus 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good
2006-07-09 14:56:12 · answer #7 · answered by Josh S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's really nice and touchin....and i hope u get over it soon and find a better someone :)
2006-07-09 14:56:54 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
really nice, especially the end
2006-07-09 15:00:47 · answer #9 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow!! you write good poems
2006-07-09 14:55:13 · answer #10 · answered by Nobody 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋