Now you hate me
I remember when you didn’t
Some misunderstanding ?
Or just a lack of interest…
Whatever the reason
You have not completely explained
Yeah you gave your reasons
But they don’t satisfy
This ache inside my mind
This hurt down in my chest
Tossing and turning
All of the possibilities
Round and round
Up in my mind
Off and on
Hope comes and goes
Why the sudden change
Of heart and of your mind ?
You claim it was never there
And left me to imagine
What we had was not real
As real as I knew it to be
But just between you and me
It will always be
2006-07-09 06:59:32 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
I like it. I am sorry for you, and it sounds to me that you two had something special, and I am truly sorry for your loss.
It is a beautiful poem.
Harrison
2006-07-09 07:14:19 · answer #1 · answered by Doc 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think your poem is great....it allowed me to understand what you are, or were going through in your life....keep up the good work!! It really helps to write things down when they are troubling you....it's like a form of therapy.
2006-07-09 14:11:05 · answer #2 · answered by STRETCH 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
is beutiful your fellings show intensively.... dont you feel better you have it off your chest... now write us a happy im over you poem... i like your talent.. and the poem too i love to read poems i write poems... keep up the good work... good luck.
2006-07-09 14:11:16 · answer #3 · answered by boricua_2290 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋