the N-A-M-I-B-I-A is in the house once again
telling you all how to choose a friend
take your time and you better pick wisely
it has to be someone who who looks lively
no frowns on your face, eyes sprayed with mace
give me my space, time for fun up in the place
we can jump double dutch if you know how
or I'll do the jumping you turn for a while
I smile, 'cause I got no time for little drama
I can get enough of that at home with my mama
so I get my work done, then it's time for fun
play some games, sing or go to the track to run
not all city girls play basketball
and no, I don't spray paint on walls
not going to knock it until I try it
a good friend is free, yeah, you can't buy it
(NEED A CHORUS)
so let me break it down
I'm not a classroom clown
on my face no frowns
like Almond Joy not Mounds
I'm not a psychic like Raven
but for the future I am saving
Where my girls at? better do the same thing
I won't afford to carry you and your bling
like an all-night mall my mind is open
I'm hoping my girls stay clean, no dopin'
the future is bright our present is clear
not blurry not tryin' to grow up in a hurry
gonna take my time - andar muy lento
y voy a disfrutar cada momento
don't worry, I'm not talkin 'bout you
just letting you know I'm a friend so true
(Need One More Verse)
2006-07-08 09:01:59 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Well all yall peeps that hatin maybe one day this song will take me very far!
2006-07-08 09:07:01 · update #1
That's tight. Did you write that? Hmmm........got some writing skills I see. Hey, don't let people try to discourage you. Keep on doing ya thang. :)
2006-07-08 09:06:35 · answer #1 · answered by Kooties 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
It is good better than sum others peoples dont worry if people dont like it jus keep on doing what your doing and you will get better but all i need to tell you that it is pretty good for a starter and i like how you put a nother language in it but I like it
2006-07-08 16:35:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not bad, really. :)
I applaud you for posting this in a wide-open forum. I used to write music when I was a teenager and never had the courage to show it to anyone.
Good luck!
2006-07-08 16:07:05 · answer #3 · answered by WhyAskWhy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If u write songs like u need better lyrics cause I write songs and i think u could do better
2006-07-08 16:04:40 · answer #4 · answered by Ally a 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes yes yes you got it girl you rock send me peep some love
2006-07-08 16:05:40 · answer #5 · answered by icp fan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. but the question is- can u rap?
i can seriously see remy ma or missy elliot going platinum on this one though.
2006-07-08 21:01:34 · answer #6 · answered by Riley M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
actually, my six year old might get into that song a little!
2006-07-08 16:06:45 · answer #7 · answered by dragonfly 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well it sounds good now sing it to me ,,OK?
2006-07-08 16:05:55 · answer #8 · answered by Hea Dude ! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah that kinda sucked...actually it really sucked...
2006-07-08 16:04:36 · answer #9 · answered by anonymous 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it! its cool are you like going to become an artist or something like that?
2006-07-08 16:06:40 · answer #10 · answered by Angela 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋