Tear open my heart
throw it away for another's take
leave me alone with tear filled eyes
and give me your broken hearted blade
It was all handed to you
on a silver plated platter
I gave you all you asked
but as you said yourself
it was nothing
Tear open my heart
and give me your broken hearted blade
I always won second place
so painful to know I could be first
Youve always chosen boys
little boys who never gave a damn about you
but I know you want more than sex
Tear open my heart
throw it away for another's take
leave me alone with tear filled eyes
and give me your broken hearted blade
We were so close
but we ran away like we always do
too scared of meeting the other's negative side
the fear of becomming too close
Tear open my heart
and give me your broken hearted blade
These scars you left me with
fill my life with shame
your impossible to forget
impossible to recover from
your only another bad habbit
2006-07-08 06:11:49 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Tear open my heart
throw it away for another's take
leave me alone with tear filled eyes
and give me your broken hearted blade
Im sick of these games
everyone seems to enjoy
I must be insane to continue playing
with hopes of winning
no matter how many times I lose
Tear open my heart
and give me your broken hearted blade
2006-07-08 06:13:28 · update #1
and yes, i know i prob have alot of spelling mistakes. please try to disreguard those.
2006-07-08 06:27:58 · update #2
wow... thats AMAZING
2006-07-08 06:14:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Perplexed, I loved it and give it 9.5 out of ten. Wonderful flow. Last line 'habit' - not 'habbit'. Please also change the middle verse from 'sex' to 'toys' or something like that. Sex is implied throughout and there should be a sense of the forbidden rather than the stark word......... Keep it up, look forward to reading more..................
2006-07-08 13:22:57 · answer #2 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm so sorry to read of your pain but writing is a great catharsis. Your use of likening your attraction and game-playing to addiction is quite moving. Please check your spelling however it detracts from the pathos of the poem.
2006-07-08 13:26:18 · answer #3 · answered by Kate 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wicked writing, girl! You've really got talent going for you, and I love that song you've written. Keep up the great work.
2006-07-11 03:48:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
u got me stuck on this one..
2006-07-08 13:15:23 · answer #5 · answered by peaches 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋