Tear open my heart;
throw it away for another's take.
Leave me alone with tear filled eyes,
and give me your broken hearted blade.
It was all handed to you,
on a silver platted platter.
I gave you all you asked,
but as you said yourself,
it was nothing.
2006-07-07
07:55:59
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not really finished, but comment please??
2006-07-07
07:56:17 ·
update #1
soo... im still messin around w/ it, but ive def added alot more...im about to add what i have now to a new question.
2006-07-07
10:16:30 ·
update #2
ok, so, i added what i have now. so you should go take a look and comment.
2006-07-07
10:27:30 ·
update #3
and winstonsmithratm:
that was a misspelled alliteration.
2006-07-07
10:28:12 ·
update #4