Though I haven't slept a wink
I keep sitting here to think
How nice past three days have been
So nice as I've rarely seen!
The city at thirty miles
Is something I admire.
Oh I know how fast time flies
Enjoy it, while you're here!
One day comes and one day goes,
Ambition may pull my nose
To a new place, any time
And I won't have time rhyme...
Other skies and other thoughts...
Burning passion, why it hurts???
Where are you know, "teasing guy",
Can't you see that I can't fly...
If you do not give me wings
Who cares if we are just... "kids"??
2006-07-05 17:49:18 · 6 answers · asked by Hibernating Ladybird 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
"time to rhyme", sorry, spelling mistake...
2006-07-05 17:52:00 · update #1
A teasing guy you say he is,
That's because you're a couple of kids,
Living off of each other's love
Trying to fly like a morning dove.
Good luck to you in growing your wings
So you can fly among other things,
Summerspirit take a vow
To sonnets and poems
You should take a bow.
I have tried to pass the test,
Lost my will it may be best.
So happy trails to all who do,
Write words to rhyme
Like me and you............
2006-07-06 10:17:41 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I'm so tired, I haven't slept a wink.
I'm so tired my mind is on the blink.
I wonder should I get up and fix myself a drink.
You'd say, wouldn't you want it?
I say, no, joe, it's doing me harm,
You know I'd give you everything I got for a little piece of mind.
I couldn't stand the noise.
I unplugged my refrigerator.
Now it is warm
And silent
And full of life.
2006-07-06 02:13:00 · answer #2 · answered by Rico Toasterman JPA 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is good, oh by the way, you wanted that video, I had, I can't put it on because Yahoo will probably give me a violation notice again but the name of the show is Mahoromatic: Automatic Maiden
2006-07-06 15:47:16 · answer #3 · answered by Sammy Hagar 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats a good poem..did you write it? you should publish it! Nice, keep it up! You've got some talent.
2006-07-06 01:16:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good morning..
that's a wonderful poem..
have a nice day..
2006-07-06 00:59:23 · answer #5 · answered by sally R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great!
2006-07-06 00:54:01 · answer #6 · answered by FIREHAZARD 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋