Homer:He walks around with his head down vibrating in a galaxy of insecurity He keeps his hands to himself so noone tastes the bitterness of infinity a Larva in it's solid cocoon Spring courage for courage is what you lack run but from fate you cannot hide your deepest fears lie all outside jump ontop it's time for 1 Last Fight DON'T KILL THE DEAD ASSASINATE THE ASSASINS where are you going at this time buying death on a rollercoaster ride get out of your cocoon from Me you can't hide what's the matter mamma was trying to hold down your feet beckoning to the heat mealting away in your own way covering with mudd the pain don't forget it's going to rain. p.s.it's about drugs
2006-07-05 05:08:22 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
do YOU like the poem?? If you wrote it, it's your opinion that matters not ours.
2006-07-05 05:14:26 · answer #1 · answered by mytrollinid 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, I do. I don't care as much for the capitalized part in the middle. It doesn't seem to have the same flow as the rest of it. But otherwise I like it.
2006-07-06 02:48:24 · answer #2 · answered by ehoward677 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry I couldn't help myself.. I couldn't read it.. I fell asleep.. But looking At the answers so far, I'll say no too.
2006-07-05 05:19:58 · answer #3 · answered by lifeluver 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, sorry. And I wouldn't call it a poem but rather a monologue
2006-07-05 05:31:30 · answer #4 · answered by Utah Gidget 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope
2006-07-05 05:11:34 · answer #5 · answered by bbabi 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope
2006-07-05 05:10:54 · answer #6 · answered by BurntBeneathSun♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good, it sounds like something my friends would write
2006-07-05 09:20:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no its gay get a life or a job loser
2006-07-05 15:13:59 · answer #8 · answered by wayfastwhitey89 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to me its not bad!
2006-07-05 05:12:37 · answer #9 · answered by soraiyaoa 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2006-07-05 05:19:20 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋